I've decided that I've got to have Hart be the one who makes the mistake, to have it be a reaction to the breakup with Nicole. Without this, there is no drama. So that means basically starting from scratch, though following the same basic plot.

It also puts Hart front and forward for the first part of the book. So as many chapters as possible have to be written from his perspective. Then...I'm going to try to write the other chapters in 3rd person. This is going to be a lot more work; and it may not be possible. So the smarter thing would be to just keep the whole plan to myself.

Anyway, I'm going to write the second chapter to today and see how it turns out.

I've decided a need a Nicole chapter setting the scene before I go back to Hart.