This was from a couple of days ago: Bend Community Center, KTVZ. Still trying to figure out how being audited translates into being a "fiscal rebound." Sounds rather worser than betterer.
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I think I've improved my book, but I don't know how to find out. I can't ask the same people to read it again, and whoever I give it to, won't have read the other version.
Really, when it comes to writing, in the end you're on your own.
Anyway, Like I said yesterday, I was ready to set it aside, when I think I got the inspiration for the big step up on the 'third' version.
Rewrote the first chapter, which I had read last week at writer's group so they were all familiar, and they all thought it was a real improvement.
So now all I have to do is do that to the rest of the book.
Yeah, that's all.
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I also keep going back and forth as to whether I want to try to get an agent, or simply published online.
Immediate gratification is probably not the best of reasons.
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The big change is basically putting the snark back into the voice of the main, first person character. I think it works. Make him a little crazy, unpredicatable.
I can do that.
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Petraeus affair seems so high school.
Who would've thunk that the 'reporter-er' would turn out to be even more of a loon than the 'reporter-ee.'
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Actually, what country is MORE conservative than the U.S.A? Anybody in Europe, Canada, Mexico?
No?
How about Africa.
Maybe some dictatorships, and countries in the middle east?
Not wait. Don't . Please. Go.
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I'm serious. Maybe some of you conservatives can point out a functional modern government that is more laisse faire than the U.S.A. with less health care, less taxes, less government interference in life.
I mean. We're the wild west compared to most countries I'm aware of.
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