Wednesday, July 30, 2014

TUSKERS II and TUSKERS III

So I've decided to write TUSKERS II and TUSKERS III.

Take the story to the logical conclusion.  Write them fast, write them fun.

Meanwhile, I've had a couple of legit criticisms to TUSKERS.

1.) The Tuskers aren't monstrous enough.

2.) The shift between 1st and 3rd person is distracting. 

 So I'm going to try to fix those problems in the second draft.

Any of you guys have any other constructive criticisms?

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