I found a plot hole about a third of the way through Led to the Slaughter. Well, "found" isn't probably the right word. I sort of knew about it, but had just sort of finessed the problem, ironed over it. It has to do with introducing a character in a sort of backward way.
To fix it, I think I'll have to write a new chapter. It will give me a chance to put in some werewolf action, which the book could use about then. But yeah, after about the third rewrite, I'm still addressing basic problems.
I don't think I'm overwriting by doing this. I tend to underwrite in the first place and takes several drafts before I really catch up to where it should be. Don't know if I'm better off underwriting -- or whether I might prefer to overwrite and then cut.
I think where I've become more comfortable in rewriting it's because I'm trusting that I am improving it, and not just moving around words.
Usually, it's a clarification, or a better and more precise or cleaner way of saying things. Occasionally it's a nice 'telling detail.'
But I'm pretty sure in most cases that the rewrite makes it a better book.
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