I've gotten all the feedback for "Takeover." Now I have to collate it.
It's a long slow process. Will probably take three days, at a guess.
Then a once-over lightly rewrite, adding the descriptive details I got on my trip, making sure the transitions work and the new scenes are covered.
But other than that, I like this book.
I read at writer's group. Only Pam was there, so it was more a matter of reading it aloud to someone and seeing how it sounded to me.
It sounded very smooth. I liked the characterizations and the interactions. It was more than fine.
I think I may have reached a point where I'm writing what I think is good material and have nowhere to send it, no way to get it noticed.
So be it. I know what I accomplished and I'm proud of it.
3 days ago