I read the final chapter to Linda and she pointed out that it was lacking tension.
I have a tendency toward the end of a book to want to wrap things up neat and tidy. Just a little too cut and dried.
So I'm just going to completely write a new version, then steal from this version those things that worked.
The general idea of the chapter was fine, but the approach was wrong.
Funny thing is, I'm not bothered at all. In a way, I finished the book, now I'm just trying to improve it.
I also have a short epilogue in mind. It might be a little corny, a little too neat. I'll have to write it and see.
2 days ago