Read the first 20 pages of my "kickass 100 pages" at writer's group and, well -- they didn't kickass.
I asked for it. And they told me.
So back to the drawing board.
Slept on it. I think I can punch it up a little by starting with an action scene from toward the end of the book, and then flashing back.
If I change the order of chapters a little after that, and try to tighten them up, I should be able to get across what I'm trying to do.
I've always thought this book would benefit from research, but I'm not going to do the research without a contract, and maybe I can't get the contract without the benefit of research.
So it may not happen.
I just keep telling myself that's OK. This isn't my kind of book, ordinarily. I gave it a shot, but in some ways it would be a relief to go back to my previous way of doing things.
I still think the book is a good idea though. But if they can't see that...
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