I think there is a chance to make "Faerylander" a good book. So I may spend more time on it than I thought.
For one thing, I think there is some better writing in some of the earlier versions--simpler and clearer. I'd like a chance to pick the best writing out of all the different drafts. That would take some time.
I also think I need to make Cobb's journals into 3rd person, so the only 1st person narrator will be Parsons. That should clear away some of the confusion.
I'm thinking I might be able to figure out an action first scene--the aftermath of which, Parsons shows up to pick up a drunk and unconscious Cobb.
Hold the Edgar Allen Poe chapter until after they visit the black elf. "The first of the writers who started him on his quest for the Dark Realms."
Hold the Tolkien chapter until later--or save it until the next book.
All right. Worked all day on the beginning, moving the Edgar Allen Poe chapter from the first and starting the book with a short action scene.
I'm trying to make this reader friendly.
None of this may work. I'm going to finish the rewrite, but I might set it aside yet again.
As Martha said, this has been one long soap opera for the last 7 or 8 years. I can't seem to let it go.
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