Wednesday, February 8, 2017

The Toad King is unpredictable. He's strange and funny and a little alien. He's is full of braggadocio and doubt and empathy and greed.

His voice should be unique and fun, especially since his story is being told in first person/present tense.

For the last couple of chapters, the Toad King has been just your normal adventure narrator. It's not completely wrong, because the story needed to move in a adventure direction and that required him doing things that were somewhat predictable.

But no more. The Toad King controls this story, not the plot!

I need to really nail down the Toad King's voice for the rest of the book. He needs to be quirky and surprising and a little bit alien.

So that's my goal for the day. To find that strangely smiling voice. 

1 comment:

Dave Cline said...

There's quite a few images out there on Google Images (or Bing, ick!)

They might give you inspiration...

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_nXA-Es1luUc/TXg8yVQxppI/AAAAAAAAAC0/JM8ZvlmVoA4/s576/2011%20017.jpg

And a card game:
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/--z9-e0yLYh0/UL3bZwNqjuI/AAAAAAAAANk/uebw4h33s9A/s1600/king_toad.jpg

And the formal Wind in the Willows:
http://www.smh.com.au/news/tv--radio/warts-and-all/2007/12/16/1197740092175.html